Tuesday, 4 November 2014

Chapter 25 and 26...

So, I've updated the next two chapters of Detention Boys... one from Dylan's point of view and one from Alec's.
Chapter 25 was the chapter that I wanted everyone to see Dylan's relationship with his mother.I wanted to show that she is completely at ease with his homosexuality and that she accepts and loves him for who he is.
Chapter 26 was also showing a mother/son relationship... this time with Alec. You don't really get to know Alec's mother in the beginning of the story, therefore the comparison between the way Alec's mother is acting and the way she used to be is conveyed through the comparison that Alec makes inside of his own head.
Chapter 26's purpose is to also develop plot; this is done by the introduction of the mysterious guy outside Nando's. From this point on wards the story will begin to develop in terms of Alec and Dylan's relationship but also in story line as well.
I don't intend for Detention Boys to just be about Alec's growing feelings for Dylan... there is a lot more to it than that ;)

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