Progression Update

As most of you already know, I posted Chapter Fifty-One of Detention Boys; the final chapter.
It may gave came as a shock that I ended the story quite abruptly- I was shocked. That wasn't how I planned on ending the story at all, but during the process of writing the last few chapters of Detention Boys, things changed.
I wasn't happy with the story. In my effort to update as frequently as possible for you all I made some rash decisions concerning the plot that, really, just mucked up the whole story.
I noticed that the quality of the chapters was slowly getting worse and the story of Dylan and Alec didn't deserve that.
So that's when I thought up 'The Detention Slip'.
I am now currently re writing Dylan and Alec's story- the way I want to, with the time and effort it deserves.
This is going to take a while, and it will be even harder than writing it for the first time. I have to read what I already wrote, decide what I don't want to change, and then think up the things I want to change.
So because I probably wont be able to update The Detention Slip every week, I am going to start 'The Days I Spent With Grace' even sooner than I had planned. I really think you guys are going to love this story.
I will update The Detention Slip whenever I can, and hopefully update The Days I Spent With Grace on a daily basis - when the first chapter will be published I'm not sure yet, but I will let you all know when I have a date.

Chapter Fifty of Detention Boys

Warning- this next chapter contains gay sex and possibly a few feels. Enjoy! 

(P.S - there is part of chapter 49 in here because it made the scene flow better)

I sat up and moved towards the edge of the bed as he made his way towards me, and I sat so he was stood between my legs. He ran a hand through my hair, tilting my head back so he could kiss me. He tasted of toothpaste, clean and fresh, and I groaned when his tongue entered my mouth.

“You make noised like and I won’t stop,” he said against my lips.

“What if I don’t want you to stop?” I asked, and he pulled away to look at me.

“Are you saying...”

“Yes,” I replied, without a trace of doubt.

“You sure?”

“Completely.”

With that his mouth returned to mine and this time we didn’t have to worry about taking things to far. This time, we were taking thing as far as they could go.

He mouth devoured mine, and he slowly brought me to my feet. His lips travelled along my jaw and down my neck as his hands travelled up my check. He pulled back and looked me straight in the eye, our noses barely touching, as he slowly pulled down my zip. He pushed my hoodie down and discarded it on the floor, where his clothes would soon be joining it.

He combed his fingers through my hair, holding my face close to his.

“You can tell me to stop at anytime,” he said.

“I know. I trust you.”

He pulled my face to meet his lips and kissed me. He kissed me with lust, with passion, but most importantly; with love.

“I love you,” he said breathlessly, as he planted kisses just below my ear.

I took his face in my hands and turned his head to face me, so I was looking into his eyes.

“I love you,” I said back, “and I trust you.”

He smiled and gave me soft, delicate kiss on the lips.

“Then let’s get those clothes off then, shall we?”

Dylan’s mouth returned to my neck while his hands searched for the edge of my t shirt, and when he found it he pulled back away from my neck and swiftly pulled it over my head.  He rested his hands on my shoulders and slowly trailed them down my chest, over my abdomen and  to the top of my sweats.

My breathing was heavy, and I couldn’t take my eyes off of him. His eyes followed the movement of his hands, taking me in and admiring every bit of me. Dylan looked up and caught me watching him; he blushed slightly and grinned at me.

“I could stare at you all day,” he said breathlessly.

“I wouldn’t stop you from doing a little touching too,” I added, and he laughed.

I reached towards him and lifted up his shirt. Dylan’s skin was pail and flawless, apart from a few light scars that marked his skin. I could tell that Dylan was nervous, as was I, and trying to take this slow was proving quite a challenge.

“What are you most nervous about?” I asked him as I leaned forward and kissed his neck. His breath caught as I started to suck; I wanted to leave my mark on his pale skin, one with more fond memories than some of the others.

“I’m scared of hurting you,” he said, his hands slipping into my sweats and boxers to cup my ass. “I’m scared of doing things you don’t want.”

Satisfied with the blemish now forming on his neck, I kissed my way down to his collar bone and along his shoulder.

“You won’t hurt me,” I said against his skin, “and I want you. I want you in any way I can get.”

I left his shoulder and returned to his mouth, pressing my lips against his, entering his mouth with my tongue. I knew that Dylan was scared that he’d do something I wouldn’t like, that he would make me change my mind. Luckily, I knew how to reassure him; that was by taking charge and making the first move.

I removed my mouth from his, biting his bottom  lip. He groaned and squeezed my ass, pulling me closer against him. I could feel his erection through the thin fabric of his boxers, no doubt matching mine.

I kissed his chin, his Adam’s apple, his chest. I flicked each of his nipples with my tongue, making him moan, before continuing further south. I let my tongue trail down his abdomen to the edge of his boxers. I kissed along the seam while my hands travelled up the back of his thighs, under his boxers. I got down onto my knees.

Going slow wasn’t so bad when you were giving it.

I let my nose trail up his inner thigh, my breath teasing his erection.

“Alec,” groaned Dylan, weaving his fingers through my hair. I slowly pulled his boxers down, the back first, leaving his erection covered for as long as possible. He hissed at the friction when I pulled them fully off.

“Someone’s happy to see me,” I said, replaying the first time he had given me a blow job. Back then I had been nervous and confused about my feelings. Now I know that I love this man, and I also know exactly what to do with my mouth.

“Fuck you,” he replied, grinning with his eyes screwed shut.

“Wouldn’t you like to?” I threw back. This time, Dylan opened his eyes and looked down at me, and his grip tightened slightly on my hair.

“Yes, I would,” he replied.

I was overwhelmed by the intensity of his stare, and I knew that this, this would not be ‘just sex’.

With his gaze still on me, I leaned forward and licked the head of his cock. I was prepared for the taste this time and didn’t hesitate to take him fully into my mouth.

“Oh God,” moaned Dylan.

I sucked him slowly, listening to the sound of his breathing. When it began to increase I pulled away and looked up at him, saying words I never thought would leave my mouth.

“I want you to come inside me.”

Dylan nodded before helping me to my feet and pushing me down onto the bed. Slowly, he removed my sweats, then my boxers and threw them onto the floor. Here I was, fully naked in front of Dylan Lewis and I didn’t feel the slightest bit embarrassed.

“You trust me?” he asked.

“Always,” I replied.

“Then turn over.”

I did as he asked and lay on my stomach. I heard him open a drawer before I felt the bed shift. Slowly, he lay down on top of me and placed kisses between my shoulder blades and up my neck. He rested his knees on either side of my thighs and I could feel his erection against the back of my leg.

“You’re going to have to relax,” he said softly into my ear, before placing a kiss just below it. He sat back and I heard him open the bottle of lube, squeezing some out. A moment later I felt his fingers trail up the crack of my ass and I tensed up.

“Alec,” said Dylan gently, “roll onto your side.”

I did as he said and he lay down behind me, my back resting against his chest. He lightly trailed one hind up and down my side while the other returned to my ass.

“Just relax, focus on the feel of my lips,” he said as he started to suck on my neck. The feel of his lips on my neck was turning me on again, and I began to moan softly. Dylan took that a sign to continue and gently slipped one finger into me.

“Shit,” I gasped.

“That okay?” he asked as he back to move his finger in and out.

“Yeah,” I breathed as I got used to the feel of his finger inside of me. Without warning he slipped in another and I instantly tensed up.

Dylan moved them slightly and I moaned. I felt him smile against my shoulder.

His other hand took hold of my cock and he slowly began to stroke me.

“That’s it, just relax,” he whispered. He started moving both of his fingers, spreading them out inside me, stretching me. It wasn’t long before I was panting and sweating.

“Dylan. Now,” I panted, removing his hand from cock. I sighed when his fingers left me and he rolled me on to my back.

He was rock hard and ready to go, that’s for sure. Dylan reached down on the floor and picked up a condom packet. I held my hand out and he raised his eyebrows before passing it to me. I sat up and ripped the packet open with my teeth and took out the condom. Slowly, I rolled it onto Dylan and he moaned at the feel of my hands on him.

“I’ll go slow,” he said, reapplying more lube. “Tell me if I’m hurting you too much.”

“I will,” I said as he positioned himself at my entrance.

Slowly, he began to push his tip in, but I instantly tensed up.

“Sorry,” I said.

“It’s fine. Just relax, don’t think about it too much.”

“Kind of hard to do when you’re away to shove that thing into me.”

“What thing?” he teased, leaning his face closer to mine.

“Your dick.”

“Oh, I that’s what you meant,” he said, smiling before kissing me.

He was trying to get me to relax by talking to me, and that was just another thing to add to the list of the reasons why I love Dylan Lewis.

“I love you,” he said, smoothing the hair back from my face.

“I love you too. Now just get your dick inside me,” I said, playfully pushing him away.

“Aye aye, captain!” he replied. He even saluted me.

I laughed and Dylan chose that moment to push the head of his cock into me. My laughter was cut off by my groan, and Dylan cursed.

“Shit Alec, you’re so tight.”

“Anal virgin, if I didn’t make that clear,” I said, trying to distract myself from the stinging sensation.

Dylan laughed and put my leg over his shoulder.

“I’m going to go in slowly, this is going to hurt,” he said.

“It’s okay,” I replied. I reached down with my hand and he took it in his and squeezed.

Slowly, he edged forward, inch by inch. I clenched my eyes shut as they began to water and held onto Dylan’s hand for dear life.

“Alec-“started Dylan in a worried voice.

“Don’t stop,” I said, gritting my teeth.

When Dylan was all the way in he brought my leg down from his shoulder and lay down on top of me. I locked my legs around his waist and winced when he shifted.

“Are you okay?” asked Dylan, wiping away the tears that had managed to escape.

“I’m good, just give me a few seconds. God, why are you so big?”

“I’ll take that as a compliment,” he said before leaning down and kissing me. He stroked my tongue with his slowly, the feel of his tongue piercing turning me on again.

“Dylan?”

“Yeah?”

“You can move now.”
“You sure? I can-“

“Just move,” I all but growled, pulling his forehead against mine and tangling my fingers in his hair.

He grinned at me and slowly moved his hips back before thrusting them forward again. I winced for the first few thrusts but I then began to get used to his size.

“Alec, you’ve got no idea how good you feel,” moaned Dylan, resting over me on his upper arms.

I began to rise up to meet his thrusts, and I could tell that it was taking all of Dylan’s self-control to stay at this slow pace.

“Dylan,” I said, taking his sweaty face in my hands. I smoothed back his damp hair and he looked me in the eyes.

“Yeah?”

“Faster.”

“I might hurt you.”

“I don’t care, I need you to go faster.”

He searched my eyes, making sure that I was sure. I nodded and gave him a kiss before he sat back and put my leg back over his shoulder.

He quickened his pace, gradually building up speed. I had my hands fisted in the sheets and the pain was dulling down, being replaced by pleasure. Dylan kept shifting his angle, as if he was looking for-

“Holy fuck!” I groaned as Dylan hit a spot that must have been filled with rainbow and unicorns.

“There it is,” gasped Dylan, grinning at me like a maniac. He thrust into me again and again, hitting that spot over and over. Where my erection had faded due the pain, it was now standing to full attention.

Dylan was now groaning and gasping, his pace getting more uneven.

“Alec, stroke yourself. Come before I do,” he gasped.

I began stroking myself in time with his thrusts, and it wasn’t long before I was close.

“I’m going to come,” I said, just as I felt my toes curl and I was consumed in ecstasy.

“Ahh fuck,” I cried out as I came.

Dylan reached down and took my hand in his as he screwed his eyes shut and cried out. I felt him come inside me, and he slowed down his pace to a stop as his body quivered through his orgasm.

I had never seen anything as hot as that in my life.

Dylan opened his eyes and looked down at me smiling, and I began to laugh. He joined in and kissed the back of my hand.

Slowly, he pulled out and disposed of the condom into a nearby bin. He got some wipes and helped clean myself up before collapsing down next to me.

We lay there for a few minutes, holding hands and catching our breath. It was me who spoke first.

“Gay sex is better than straight sex.”

Dylan burst out laughing and hit me with a pillow.

“I love you,” he said, rolling over to face me. I copied his position.

“I love you,” I replied. And I really, really did.

So I'm way behind on updating this...

Right, I'm so behind on updating this and I'm sorry! I have barely found the time to update Wattpad, and that has been my priority!
Right now I'm just going to clear the slate.
So in the past few chapters (40+) things have not been going so well for Alec and Dylan, and this was just to show that their relationship isn't perfect. No relationship is, but Chapter 49 showed that they are able to work through their problems and communicate with each other well.
Chapter 50 has been set to private by wattpad, and I am unable to change that at the moment! But that chapter was one I had to take my time with and re edit before posting, and you'll probably understand why!

Chapters 35. 36. and 37

So. I guess I was having a good day, so you lucky people got an extract three chapters.
Chapter Thirty-Five
Of course Dylan wasn't going to be angry at Alec, he's too reasonable to judge a situation before he knows the full story. I wanted Dylan to open up to Alec, and although he did a bit, Alec is aware that he doesn't know the full story of what went on between Dylan and Jayme- so that will be explored at some point.
Chapter Thirty-Six
I needed to have Dylan and Alec's family meet- so dinner seemed like the best option. I also can't wait to write about Alec's dad's work's charity dinner- I'm looking forward to it, much more than Alec is.
And chapter Thirty-Seven
Alec telling the school about his relationship with Dylan. I'll admit, I'm not 100% happy with this chapter, and it will need some serious work in re editing but for now it will do. I'm happy that they are both in a public relationship now, so that will be much more fun to write.

So I'm a little behind on updating this...

Right. So I completely forgot to update this, yet again. I'm hopeless.
Anyway, so chapter Thirty-Two. This chapter was all cute and cuddly and aww... I'm just in love with Dylan and Alec so much...
The purpose of this chapter was to really address the issue as to why Dylan told Alec he was gay right when they met. I know that a lot of you had been asking me this and said it was unrealistic and what not, but I hope this chapter helped you understand why Dylan told him when he did.
Chapter Thirty-Three. So Luke already figured out that Alec had been seeing Dylan. This chapter I really wanted Luke and Alec to show their relationship- although they might not be close, they do like each other and look out for each other, and from this point on wards their relationship will become a lot closer. In this chapter I also wanted to develop Luke's character a bit. I know some of you pictured him as some lazy, depressed teenager who hated the world etc. but he isn't. He's a really smart kid who just keeps his head down , who doesn't need to be popular and go out partying all the time. In a way he is sort of the opposite to Alec- although Alec doesn't feel the need to be popular and party all the time; that's just who he is.
Now, I know a lot of you saw the affair coming, and that actual act isn't something vital to the story- the aftermath is, and I can't wait to write that part of the story, so I'm not going to say any more about it!
And of course, chapter Thirty-Four... Alec expresses his fears and the appearance of Jayme. I loved writing this chapter so much, I knew right from the start how it would go! And I'm sorry, but I couldn't resist leaving it on a cliff-hanger. :)

So some of you guys have been reading this...

So I've noticed that some of you have been reading this blog.... yeah, the blog I completely forgot about! So I'm now updating it for you!
So, chapter twenty-eight/chapter twenty-nine. These chapters are where Dylan tells Mitch about his relationship with Alec and Alec decides to come out to his friends. I loved writing these chapters, simply because I thought that they really help with the characterisation for Sam, Matt, Mitch and Cam... I knew from the start that they would all accept Alec's relationship with Dylan, but I wanted each of their reactions to be different and suited to their personalities. Sam found out first, by himself because he is Alec's best friend. Matt is the more maturer one of the group and Cam... well he's unpredictable ;)
Mitch's reaction to Dylan telling him about his relationship with Alec is something that will be explored more as the story progresses... Mitch is very protective of Dylan, because Mitch was the one who was there during Dylan's relationship with Jayme, and he's seen a side to Dylan that no one else has... yet.

Chapter thirty. The double date. This was also fun to write, It was to get Alec to mingle more with Mitch and Sally. But also, there is that all important foreshadowing of the fortune cookies ;)

And of course, chapter thirty-one. The R rated chapter. This stuff is really difficult to right since I am a girl, but I enjoy reading it other peoples stories so of course I've got to write it for you guys! What I really try to do is make it more focused on the closeness of Dylan and Alec's relationship, and how at ease Alec is becoming with his sexuality, rather than just a crazy gay sex scene.

The writers block is officially gone, but these two weeks on the run up to Christmas are going to be crazy busy with school work, uni applications, christmas ball etc. SO I WILL TRY TO UPDATE ASAP! But on the plus side, the rest of my family are going away for the week after xmas... so I'll have lots of free time... time to update :)

Chapter 27

So chapter 27 eh? Well, it's the longest chapter I've written so far, that's for sure!
In this chapter I just wanted Dylan and Alec to spend some time together in a normal way, let you guys see them have a bit of fun, you know?
Unfortunately I can feel some writers block coming along.... OH NO *cries*
Hopefully I'll be able to get past it quickly and not let it affect me too much... I'm really liking the direction this story is headed right now, so stay with me, cause things are going to get a whole lot better!